I am the daughter of an English major! I read a lot and frequently note proof-reading errors as well as awkward phrasing and grammatical inconsistencies. I like stories about seduction, overcoming reluctance, coercion, and especially when these occur within a family. I read a lot of books with paranormal, urban fantasy, and general erotica themes. What I enjoy the most is the idea of the planning and coordination involved in setting up a sexual scenario. My favorite fantasy is from an old "Letters to Penthouse" compilation. It involves a group of men playing poker when the wife of the host comes home buzzed and aroused from watching male strippers.....mmmmm Hope I can help polish your work to show off your wild and sexy imagination! Kathi