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Christmas , Diwali , Id .................
What is the deeep , underlyin' message......?
Within the joyous greetings , the
Atmosphere of Good Cheer----
Reflect , reflect my dear.
It's not only 'bout guzzlin' beer
Reflect , reflect , reflect d'you hear ??!
- COMMENTS
todski28over 10 years agohas eaten my last three comments on it,
here I go again!
the repeating of reflect really hammers home the underlying message of the "holiday seasons" rather than the self indulgence it seems to entice, really liked this Ash
buttersover 10 years agoeven without the layout, which is definitely your own style right now. this one works - probably because it's something just about everybody believes. i also like the play with reflect - by using it more than once you bring focus to it, different undertones, get the mind to explore possible avenues of meaning. each time it's 'said' i hear a different tone to the N's voice which colour where my thoughts are allowed to travel.
Ashesh9over 10 years agoAuthorReflect o Mind , reflect without fear
Truth's not far it's verry near
Reflect dear mind
Reflect my dear !
Oldbear63over 10 years agoA lot more reflection, a little less guzzling. Well said, my friend. 5'd
