Do you believe ..........?

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Do you believe , what they said ?
Skies may be full of lies but blood is red
They've issued a sub-peona
Poor , darlin' dear Leona
Evidence is scarce
Like money in a beggar's purse
How long will this take ?
Are you real or am I fake ?
Matter is sub judice
Cool sweet lime juice
Cross- examination is on
Witness is a pawn
Do I believe , what they said ?
Sky may hold many a lie----
But blood is definitely red !

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 10 years ago
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I like this one because I actually understand it which is not true of some of your others, but that's my bad! Not absolutely sure why it's the sky that lies

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
very good

enematic

would you believe

it would be better without.......?etc.

this is the kind of thing you have to focus on, i.e. write less sub pars, and edit more on the good.

5ed

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
yeah I'm wondering too

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todski28todski28over 10 years ago
Just wondering

, I like the rhyme and the depth in the piece. Is it about the whole judicial system, or is it a specific case?