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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Bodies fall in love
   Forgettin' they have
Minds attached above
   Bodies age , minds evolve


Bodies @ 20
    Are diff @ 60
Minds @ 60
    Have improved from 20


Minds may fall out of love
    Trapped in brains above
But that's no excuse to fuck
     A 30 somethin' stud , slut-yuck!

Ashesh9
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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years agoAuthor
Too frequently as often tge girl is a coffin chaser / gold digger&

The man an old lech/creep albeit rich 'n powerful ! Whatever happened to a comanionship of equally powerful , stimulatin' spouses ??!

erectus123erectus123over 11 years ago
humorous

first couplet excellent, use of @ is modern but questionable, 3rd couplet could have clear development and go further dividing male and female activities Do I understand you as suggesting sex should be between like/similar parties based on age, certainly as intellects I agree but many older men lose ability to produce firm erection and many older women lose desire and ability to perform so frequent 60 yr old man is fucking 30 year old women, no?

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
BODIES HAVE NO THOUGHTS

being led by lustful brains. TK U MLJ LV NV