Night .....n' ........Day

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Shadows lengthen
  Dusk falls
Sorrow smiles
  Day dies .....

Dawn breaks
  Birds sing
Life awakes
  Sun begins ......

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 11 years ago

Agree with others. Very nice. Intended or not, the "s" endings in 6 of the 8 short lines enhance the sound of this short poem with just enough variation in it from the two lines that don't end with the letter "s.".

demure101demure101about 11 years ago
Very nice indeed!

And economical with words. Great!

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks everybody &

S.O. thnx for the reco --BTW it's Lassi !--A9

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
and you are recommended

today by me for what it is worth.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionabout 11 years ago
Nothing epic

...but at least it is simple and scans - (yay!) - well done.

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