Poet vs. Technician

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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if one has to plan , chisel & write
a Poem : o what a Fright ?!
agonizin over beat , rhythym 'n adverbs ??!
Idiocy to the power Lunacy only serves ....
watchin for the Iambic
Da dum ti dum ti dum
while mechanically the
brains whirr'n hum
So my digitized friend 1,2,0 & 1
nobody's lost'n nobody's won
if U promise to give up your lunacy
i too will surrender my idiocy

Ashesh9
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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years agoAuthor
1201 ...."so why are you here ?"...

1. I find your question obscenely offensive but i am here to post my poems : not to hear ur unsolicited advice

2. Is this Literotica.com your Father's property : who are you to issue a Fuckin' show-cause "what are you doing here ?"

3. I adore a good Fight : so if it's Warfare U r lookin' for Bring it On !!!!!!

tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
DEUX EX MUSE EX MAQUENO

each to their own and theirs. TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
no more bumper stickers

a little thought - it ends - a comment or two with specifics, it ends, and I go back to handing out the fives, and perhaps advice, and you don't have to take it, but I do take the baits and I'm not the kind of fish you want in the boat.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
ash

really now, I receive these emails with a certain regularity, and then I checked the comments( I saw none, a certain pattern I have seen before). For the most part they could be generated in less than 10 minutes. But really now the heart of the issue, IF you are not yet another poison pawn, is the amount of nonsense you post. Fact is two poems in one day, specifically directed at me and the amount of time spent defending what, you are a poet. Show it more often, most of your submissions are substandard, some however are not. Almost no comment from you has any substance. And you keep pointing fingers?

You the poet, immune from criticism? This is what 5th or 6th in a series? You are not that stupid to realize that excess punctuation and lack of edit could perhaps be legitimate advice, that was the gist of earlier comments, your failure to take that and future email tells me sometime else is going on. A game perhaps, in other words you are NOT really interested in poetry. So why are you here?

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years agoAuthor
Angie, Erectus, Kiki , Tess thnx for ur comments ......1201

I've nuthin' to do with the Honky-anon ---this ain't a plant , set-up or as they say in Urdu a Saazish but U do have strong John Foster Dullesian Domino & Conspiracy Theories & Yes now U remind me I did ask U whether U r a Russian or an Egyptian in the long-ago era when U wrote or used to write poems with an international flavour which used to capture my imagination !! Where has that Poetic flair disappeared , old friend : all i perceive is a Grumpy ole' Grouch who continually wallows & whines in Self-pity nowadays!?!?

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