Shatter ( 2 versions )

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
155 Followers

Shatter invisible crystal ball
& watch all those ....imperfections , shackles , pettiness
To total destruction fall ...........!!

Or


Shatter invisible crystal ball
& watch imperfections , shackles, pettiness......
To utter anhilation fall !!!


( there are 2 versions of the same poem : dear Reader choose whichever version works for You !)

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years agoAuthor
Sorry for the typo in my red-hot rage i wrongly typed an extra "d" in

" Buddhist "

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years agoAuthor
1201 the seventh level of Consciousness Sahasrara chakra in the Center of the Brain

has been likened by Enlightened Yogis'n Seers to a Glass Crystal ball : do shatter your thinly-veiled undeconstructed White-skinned Racism , Imperialism & Reactionary Petit Bourgeoiseness to allow other World-views specifically Non-Christian , Brown , Black or Yellow-skinned philosophies to peacefully co-exist even if you don't understand Vedantic/ Budddhist or Zen philosophy !?!?!?!?

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago

c'mon

that was my choice, I didn't vote

I am going to let you in on a secret, one of the differences between people (including me) is the amount of bad ideas we post, now what is the reason for posting this? same as what is the reason for non honing? not every thought is worth thinking, let alone writing down. I wasn't joking ash, I could easlity do 500 of these things in a week, 499 would be complete and utter bullshit.

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
# 2 too

You are so kind in your comments on my stuff and, in all honesty, I have to say you are improving (or I'm starting to believe your poetry more) but your words should make the exclamation points unnecessary.

erectus123erectus123over 10 years ago
prefer #2

with final line of #1

rock on!