What I meant to write ...

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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so Utterly near............
.............so Terribly far

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredalmost 10 years ago
Absolute Reality...?

Proof that one word can make such a difference.

This spoke to me and made me give out a heart felt sigh. This caught me at the right time and place.

I cannot critique from a technical point of view but did your words touch me emotionally?

Yes they did, so 5ed

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 10 years ago
and then...

this is a wonderfully succinct version if a massive pile up caused by you texting while driving and rear ending the guy in front of you and not wearing a set belt and the ambulance getting stuck in a traffic jam, yes, less is generally more in poetry

I didn't vote.

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