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It's now seven years and thousands of toe-curling orgasms later, and I couldn't be happier as Mrs. William Nelson and with our six year old daughter Geovana, and our four year old son Brandon.ell
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DukeofPaducah6 days agoThe fault I find in this character is not that she pursues a more suitable partner and prefers to keep it that way, it’s the way she maintains her relationships. Her lack of empathy and honesty is where she comes up short. She shortchanges her husband emotionally and doesn’t have the courage to have an honest conversation about it, preferring to feign anger and indignity at her husband’s request for divorce after starving him in that direction. Her experience with love seems largely with herself.
I must say that you consistently write interesting complex characters consistently repellent to me.
They never fail to make think. Thank you for that.
Mama always told me not to look into the
sights of the sun
Whoa, but mama that’s where the
fun is — Bruce Springsteen
26thNCabout 4 years agoGabriella was a cheating slut, but she kicked some ass. Good story despite the cheating wife.
kmreaderabout 5 years agoSo single dude pretending to be married seduces a married woman. Not that there’s no fault on her part but the least he should have to do is raise someone else’s child with no support from the real father while she becomes unable to have future children of their own during the birthing process. Story was ok, ALL of the main characters sucked. I didn’t particularly care for this story of yours. I’ve enjoyed many of your others much more than this one.
thecarolinadreamerover 5 years agoA GOOD STORY WELL WRITTEN, BUT AWFUL HARD TO LIKE. BUT THAT'S JUST ME--I RATE IT A 5 ON BASIS OF PLOT AND WRITING CRAFT. FOR IT TO P*SS ME OFF LIKE IT DID, IT HAS TO BE VERY GOOD WRITING.
THANKS, CD
