All Comments on 'Sago Diaries'

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 18 years ago
head scratching

huh? jim, I read to the bottom but I felt as though I should have not <grinin' I enjoyed your puzzle play on words, decayed....

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Thank you.

A baker's dozen were caught that night

One made it out and fights for his life.

I was unable to come up with words fitting to remember those men from the Sago mine - you've done an excellent job here.

WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
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I'm glad someone wrote this and wrote it so well. It was haunting to read in the news about the notes those miners left behind. And I love your diary approach to this poem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Excellent job

on a subject that has so caught and held the public eye. Very sad and poignant and captured those emotions perfectly.

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