All Comments on '"50 Word" Hypnosis'

Liked the way you handled a story that has been told more than once. The ending was rather sudden, but effective. Good Job.

Rather odd, although it held my interest to the end it was not an overly engaging style.

I Loved it. Even if it wasn't a hot story ! Thanks for posting.

About the not so hot : 50 words are'nt enought to build up anything except an interesting way of revisiting an old plot ;-). Great writing thanks.

A great new way to tell an old tale! Excellent!

I enjoyed the flow of this piece :)

Interesting format, I liked it, and the way it ended.