by DG Hear
A Great Read DG, I believe it to be one of your best. I always look forward to your stories. I'm never disappointed.
Waiting for your next one.
And now to investigate whatever else you have written.
Thank you, DG.
Thanks DG for another exceptionally well-written story, really one of your best. Although a trifle long, I was hooked all the way through. It tugged hard at the heartstrings of this 'old man'! You gave it the kind of happy ending I look for and love. I always look forward to great stories from DG Hear and I'm never disappointed. Pete.
a really feel good story ...always good some are better ...this is one of them
I look forward to your stories and the way you tell them. I can't believe the emotions that you evoke from me on a site that is primarily erotic. Thank you and please don't stop.
are an incurable romantic, and I wouldn't have it any other way. Your stories show a sense of rightness, and evoke emotions most others cannot even understand. Keep writing.
You have done it again DG, and given us readers another grear romantic tale. Please keep up the great work.
Looking forward to the next one.
From a United Kingdom fan.
You don’t get much of a critique from me as all I ever seem to say is; Thank you for another great story. Your Romances are always very good and your characters are hardly ever a stretch from believability. Please find the time to give us more of your great writing style and stories.<p>I always loved your Cheating stories but I can see where any writer who goes that route has to put up with we commentators always finding fault with the story line. It must get disheartening to have to always get criticism because someone else has a different bent on the subject.<p>Thank you again for the entertainment and pleasure you give.<P>PT
Potentially interesting story line, but waaay too long. The pacing just dragged. If you cut the length in half, the story would improve immensely.
Always a pleasent read....keep it up...you are by far, one of the best here!!
I enjoyed your story. The perspective from a stripper held my interest that carried forward to want to understand the trucker. Lil read through as a real character and not as the one dimensional characters that so many write. I could see her clearly. Your character was harder to envision, however.
Thanks for the read.
You may not get the same number of posters, certainly not the level of controversy (I am sure you could do without it) you have in response to your Loving Wives (or cheating wives as peggytwitty aptly put it), but almost all are flowing with praise! Like what’s not to like?
Building characters carefully, simmering the plot slowly and carefully (maybe a tad too slowly) and how can the final dish not be a gourmet?
I'm DG and want to thank the readers for the nice comments. I don't have time to answer all comments and feedback, but I really do want you to know that it is all appreciated. I know every story isn't for everyone. I try to write true and emotional feeling in my stories. I will always promise to try and give you my best. You deserve, no less.
Sincerely
DG Hear
Although I knew Lil was Julies daughter from page 2, I knew that this being a DG Hear story it would be good. You did not disappoint.
And no, it was not too long. It was just right.
I loved the whole story. The length was just perfect.It made me feel like I just read your other great story "a second chance". WOW. Keep them coming please.With very high regard, Luis
DG Hear i believe you spoke from your heart when you wrote that story because i was crying so much i had trouble reading the story i knew guys who had disabilies with no arms or legs when i was in a votech center i hope you write a epilog to this story i would love to see how Henry comes through the marriage and how Brad and amber do please DG i want to read more .
Pat M.
Atlanta,Ga
Heartwarming is pretty much an overworked word or phrase but it's the only way to describe this wonderful story. Thanks for restoring my interest in the stories on this site which lately have been getting pretty bad.
60 year old George
he either fucks thousands of women with ease, or takes time after time of rejection/postponment with a holy smile.
sheer nonsense. man, do you have an axe to grind.
A story, or two, of overcoming disability along with a great love story.. A story where the kids really like the suitor enough to conspire with him is always a very touching, enjoyable one.. I do indeed believe that all 4 kids understood what was going on with Henry and Lil.. They used their discreation to ignore it.. I thought Julie turning up again was a good twist.. It was sure hard for him to have any secrets, wasn't it?. I was wondering if Lil knew about the proposal before she was supposed to.. Really good read!!
Once again D G Hear has come up with the goods.Superb story well written with some nice touches.Always a pleasure reading your tales.Keep up the good work!!Cheers,Malcolm
i'm 71 years old. lost my first wife to cancer. met a
great lady. your story brought tear to my eyes. i could
feel the feeling in renew meeting,
Another exceptional offering from a master storyteller! The pacing for this type of story matches perfectly! The length - provided enough detail to empathize with the characters!
this story was very heart warming. You are a very talented writer.
That was a VERY touching story!! It turned out GREAT! I loved it!!
Your writing skills grows more and more with each story! Thanks for sharing your work with us!
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SleeplessinMD
and this time was no exception. I usually say "The problem with those really old songs is that I know all the words!" Well this time I realize I know the meoldy too!!!!!!!
Thanks for a great read.
cageytee
I Agree with the other readers I had tears flowing when Brad put his crutches and walked over to his younger sister and asked her to dance with him without the aid of his crutches I was hoping that the story was longer but you did a super job on it anyway DG.
Pat
this story really pulled at my heart string's. i have been looking for 20 year's. ..... rich
enjoyed your story. i have been by myself for 7 years, i just hope i can find a guy who sounds as nice as Henry and has monogamous values. they are very hard to find these days.
Is so great it leaves my eyes in tears every time i read this well written story DG .
Pat Murray
DG. Every time I read one of your stories I find the characters extremely believable. This story was no different, Yet another DG story, that while it is found on an erotic site, I would have no problem reading it with my soulmate who has been the major part of my life for 51 years through tough times and good times
Very complex in structure with a wealth of interesting moments and people. Thanks DG!
Love your story. You finished the story and you don't find many writers that do that these days. I really did love your story.
The end turned out very much differently than I had expected from the beginning. But then, that's life--it generally doesn't wind up like we'd planned it. Your characters are realistic, and the plot took enough twists that it held my interest throughout. The likelihood of running into Lil's mom such a long distance away is fairly remote, but then, sometimes it's a small, small world. I really enjoyed your story.
DG Hear, you are an incredibly talented writer with the ability to make your characters believable and have your readers empathize with them! I admit that I read the stories on Literotica because I'm a horny little bastard, but every time I read one of your stories, I forget about sex and just want to keep reading these excellently crafted stories and find out what happens to the characters.
Excellent story once again! I can't praise you enough!
It was maybe just a little on the sugary sweet side in the end,but there's nothing wrong with that. I just read an enjoyable story what was well written and seemed to be entirely plausable. If only alll the stories here were this good. anon jerry
I am a retired Green Beret. I get my medical care at a major military hospital. Every time I am there I see soldiers with artificial limbs. I am proud of them and feel for them at the same time. Thanks for the great story. Scarlatti.
by now telling you that your writin is good is like putting sugar in maple candy,,It jest wont take no more.. ...no don't go getting a big hed or nuttin but I thinks you pretty darn good
You never cease to amaze me. You're stories are always so beautifully written and I always enjoy them immensely! Great Job!
you know, these are the kind of stories i like to read here! dg you are a great writer, don't ever stop!!! there were tears in my eyes at times as i read this!!!!
thank you for a truly marvellous story, i really enjoyed it.
oh , and keep on writing.
a wonderful story - and i liked the way you tossed in the old girlfriend in a gangbang and then her husbands cheats. you got a 5.
I enjoyed the story very much. It hangs together nicely. There were a few surprises that fit in very well. Thanks for the entertainment!
Mr Hear, This is the second of your long list of submissions I have read, "My Sisters Wedding" was the first, BOTH deserve TEN stars but Literotica doesn't go that high unfortunately. Will be reading more of them as time permits....
You sir are one heck of a word master, you tell a story like very few can, you make it read like you have actually been through what your "heros" in the story are going through. Please keep more stories along this line coming, you have a real talent for them.. .
I had to ring up 5 stars for a DGH story!
However, you gotta stop it! You are ruining my image!
How can I go by texcaveman with ...ah hell...ok I will say it...watery eyes, sounds more masculine than tears...lol
Even REAL men admire stories about REAL life.
In the fucked up world we live in today this was a beath of fresh air. It made me rembember how I felt when Grandma gave me a hot out of the oven cinnamon roll.
You got me. I served in the military in the special forces. I now drive a truck, a semi with a B double trailer or sometimes a triple road train. I have had similar experiences to some of your stories. This one really brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.
Great story well told - ignore the grammar issues and occasional name switches - it happens to the pros -
To the anon who, after reading this whole story, could only comment on the cheating ex and her reaction to her husband cheating - - "Shit get a grip " that is such a small piece of this story and simply supported the cheater married a cheater postulate Henry's sister proposed get over it!!
D G Hear ignore the trolls your writing style is great, perhaps the spelling dosnt translate so well from American to English.
Charlie
But I would have told Beth how the friend who almost dumped her cheating husband fucked at least four guys at the party.
And I loved it as much as the first time.
Thank you again
even a few heart strings being pulled.
well told.
And as snobbish as they get when it comes to English language. Having said that I freely admit that the differences between American English and *ahem* correct English have absolutely no bearing when a tale is told as well as this.
Take 5* matey :-)
You've been my favorite writer on this site ever since I first found it. You're also the reason that I began submitting MY work here as well, DG. With that being said, I want you to know that out of all of your stories thus far, this one is still my all time favorite. Take care and God bless,
MP
Wish I could have given it more than the 5 stars. :)
I'm a retired truck driver myself, loved the fact that he was a driver.
with a touch of reality in it, what a novel idea. nicely done.
This Story is sooo! Heart warming I loved your effort. I read the story then re-read it Wow it made me feel better each time I read it. Thank You.
Another excellent story by DG Hear! When I want a sure-shot,in terms of a story that I can trust to be good,this writer never disappoints!
This one clearly follows the paths of real people,dealing with real problems,who finally arrive at a common destination in a real,satisfying manner.
A 5+ for a story with a happy ending!
we gave up the kings English back in 1176. anyone that doesn't like it can go home. having driven cross country when I was a lot younger use to see drivers that would jump anything . never did myself but that's the way life is. 1 of the good stories on here & would rate it a 10 + if I could. wife said if I didn't quit driving she was gone , so got off the road & she left 9 months later should have kept driving L O L
Fantastic story, had me fighting back tears there for a second. Can't let my wife know that, she thinks I'm a he-man!
I see You're a Bobby Vinton fan! I'm a singer and do his material
Nice story! Heart warming!
loved how it unfolded...not surprised about all the cheating slut whores when he was a dancer...happens all the time..only have to listen to stories ex male dancers tell to say they got every pussy going...single...married...even brides -bachelorettes... got plenty of cocks before their weddings....bet it still goes on too...great he helped Brad face his demons and look to the future....should have told his sister about her slut friend getting gang banged too...life is good for their future......
Great story. What are the real fears of those who know that marriages sometimes cheat.
But if there is love and respect, couples have no need to cheat in their relationship.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
Another example of how your mind works. You take an idea and weave it into and interesting and loving stories with many twists and turns. Thanks for sharing it with us.
is something you do as well as any author I've ever read, and I'm not just saying here on Lit. I mean anywhere. Thank you.
You nailed it. A fine story showing you that young folks can “over do” things, grow up and become mighty fine people. A true definition of a Romatic story. Well Done. Thanks. High Marks!
There, you've got me crying again. Thanks for a great, uplifting story. JustJ
I thought you went a little puritan there when the kid said ass and was told to watch his language. Plus when Henry and Lil go to Ohio and sleep in seperate places....they aren't teenagers anymore! Then she sneaks over to Henry's and it has to be kept secret! Over the top in my opinion. Oh and by the way have you ever slept on a box spring? I doubt it...sleeping on the floor would be way more comfortable!
Over the years, I have read thousands of Literotica stories.
There are few, if any, better than this one.
Paul in Oklahoma
Some of the talking was a little stilted or maybe unatural
But that is a minor thing. You had me crying for at least two pages.
Pretty damn good story to pull on my emotions like that.
Thanks.
We don't get enough stories like this in LW, especially recently. Of course, there aren't a lot of authors of DG Hear's caliber around. Just a great story of overcoming adversity and making a good life for yourself.
I read the story twice. I enjoyed it just as much as the first time. Live goes on no matter what happens.
Wreck hoping he paralyzed from waist down
Great story well written. A little far fetched in places but that still didn't detract from the general content.
JTWheels comments were totally uncalled for but then there is always one who cannot understand quality
I hate being suckered into a story. DG is good writer and story started well. But then I could not figure out how one could develop any kind of relationship with seeing a waitress during working hours once a month. Then, when Julie was introduced as Lil's mother, the story tanked for me. Such totally improbable coincidence was just too stupid, and then I stopped reading.
DG Hear: you are a fantastic storyteller! I think I read this several years ago as it seemed to be familiar! The part where Julie came out in the restaurant was amazing and his help with Brad was really great. I have a niece with Downs Syndrome so helping with Brads confidence was amazing! Again thanks for another moving story!
Baton Rouge Cajun Guy
but fouled by 2 bit commenters. So simply forget them . U Dun Gud!
Story was well written and great characters. The characters seemed to take on a life of their own and the twist of him working for Lil's mom Julie as a dancer was great. Overall it was a very enjoyable read. Well done 5++stars
How can nobody know Lil went to visit Henry when Beth lent her the van and how did she know where Henry lived as she had never been to his house?.