All Comments on 'Captured Ch. 02'

For SO LONG. And it's worth it <3

great story line!

It's way too short. And now you have me wondering what is going on with Miriam and his brother as well.

Please don't take too long in writing the next chapter.

There is way too much left unresolved. You have to continue. What about Miriam and the brother? Who is Daemon? Is he really a pirate? See? All these questions and more. You have to continue the story!!

I think everyone else already used all the great words to describe your stories so I?ll just beg.

Please we want to read more! I won't even get picky and beg for any update/new chapters to any of your wonderful stories!

One of the best stories I've read on this site. There's a lot of people who can write well, but there's only a few that can also construct a solid story to match their ability. My only regret is that I've given fives to other stories which pale in comparsion to yours. Unlike the others, I'll wait patiently for the next chapter, I wouldn't want the next chapter to be any less perfect than these two.

as usual, i loved your story. please continue with it. i think we're all hooked and curious about miriam & the brother. and daemon is sooo mysterious, you have to reveal more. another wonderful and exciting read, good job!

I just love the way you write reluctance AND romance without it being overly violent like so many of these stories can turn into. You have so much talent and I fear that your Literotica fans will never be satisfied with your updates as we want them every day!!! So another 100% from me and two thumbs up, and an Olympic Gold medal, and anything else I can heap praise on you with to keep you enthusiastic about your writing and know how loved your work has become!

Please. Like a bad Mills and Boon romance, and so literal. Ouch.

You know, there's nothing worse then reading a historical story, only to have a character open their mouths and say something thoroughly modern. The heroine telling her sister, "It's okay." completely threw me off and jarred me out of enjoying your story, which is otherwise excellently written. Please have more care if you're going to write a historical, and avoid modern turns of phrase.

Finally!! I hope you didn't mean it when you said this was going to be the last chapter in this story. :(

Listen to your fans... we're crying for MORE!!! ;-)

I really liked this story and would love to see more.

I have to agree, with Innocent pawn coming to an end it would be a shame to have nothing to look forward to. I greatly enjoy this story and I agree with most everyone in thinking that there is to much left unsaid or done. Please continue this at least a bit longer!

As you've read, we all LOVE your stories. And I really hope you continue with this one. It was so sweet, and kept me smiling. With just the right amount of lust, and sex. Pleeeeeease continue.

Your devoted reader,

Amz

Pretty bloody good I reckon!

This story is so good. I can't wait to read more!!

You did it again...another great story. Can't wait till the next chapters. Please continue!

i read both chapters....all i can say is wow....this wench sooo wants to return to those days of yesteryears...when men were men and women were scared.

Grae's wench aka rhody

PLEASE write more very very soon. Don't keep us waiting any longer, I am very keen to find out how it evolves!!!

I love all of your stories but this one takes the cake. I can't wait for more to come along. Don't keep us waiting too long I hope.

Makes me want to break out my pirate costume.

Great story but somehow for me it felt rushed and a little incomplete? Wonderful language and great story line though!

A lovely Story, rather well told. I enjoyed Myself, and found that I couldn't tear Myself away once I started to read. Your sense of the English language is delightful. A bit over the top concearning the use of Adverbs, but otherwise really nice work.

I really hope you do another installation for this series. It's so fabulous. Great wrting and imagery.

Please write more..been wwaiting for ages for this story now.. please no more ! :)

OMG, i wish that was me! I love the story!

hmm this story seems very familiar in fact i could have sworn i have read it in a romance novell, so i am guessing this isnt ur own work unleass u are the author of that particullar book, although i gotta say your other submissions are great

That was really nicely done... MORE!!!!

Please write more chapters!

EVERYONE LOVES THIS STORY AND I DO TOO. PLEASE FINISH BECAUSE HANGING IN SUSPENSE IS SOMETHING THAT I DON'T LIKE BUT I CAN WAIT A WHILE LONGER.

Oh please continue this story!!!!

More please, it is so goooooooooooood!! Ha Ha!

This is absolutely the best, HOTTEST erotic story I've ever read! I would have commented sooner, but only recently found this website. I love how you've taken the brutal act of rape and turned it into a sweet, considerate, loving event. PLEASE consider writing at least one more installment to this--it's been way too long since the last one. As you've read, you're leaving us all begging for more!!

One of my absolute Fav authors and stories! thankyou for your hard work. PLEASE write more about Daemon and Carly.

All of your stories are really good my only problem is all the characters are the same-women with blonde hair and tiny bodies and huge men with black hair and green eyes. mabye a bit more variety would be better.

Cute story I've ever read! LOL I hope you write more stories!

How sweet!!! He is a romantic brute lol

I love this story he's the perfect combination of dominant possessive and loving ahhh if only he were real

I love this story. It's well written and has a wonderful plot. And is HOT, HOT, HOT! Thank you! :) Onwards!

I think the story is rushed. There's no real plot. No seduction. He violates her and by the 2nd chapter she's in love with him? Not at all logical...

Could be stronger, however I love your story!!

So good need more

Not thrilled with first chapter. This one has a relationship developing.

This is where we see sth start b/w them. And in such a sweet way. Though nothing about ch 1 was sweet, this chapter kind of makes up for the lack of romance in previous chapter.

I FUCKING ADORE THIS! I'm probably going to lose it when I finish this. I'm gonna be so freaking sad. But also SO HAPPY CAUSE THIS IS LOVELY TO EXPERIENCE!

Seriously?

This is the quickest case of Stockholm syndrome/magic dick/ better the Devil you know than the one with bad breath!

Ha ha ha....

Why is this in the romance category? She is his captive from a rape! Are you kidding me?