All Comments on 'Courting My Sister Ch. 01'

Definitely well thought out and believable

I had a very similar relationship with my first cousin and although we haven't fucked for many years we remain the best of friends . Loved your story .

Very discriptive and well written. At first I was really turned on but as story progressed it became unrealistic- too much, to long plus continually shooting off loads of cum in spurts of four?

This was a really hot descriptive story. It got me off while I was reading it nearly as much as he got off in the story with his sister.

lots of sexual contacts but would have been better if more emphasis on loving, kissing and more kissing . Yet an excellent fantasy for anybody.

Glad to see you are writing again! Looking forward to more!

great story. the car scene got me excited.

This is great. I'm hoping for more. It doesn't need a more lovin' side and it is not unrealistic in the amount of sex and cum, as said below. It was just perfect, don't change a thing in your style.

Talent like yours should be generously shared. I hope you'll continue adding chapters to this great story.

I always use your stories to get me off. They girls are always so slutty..they remind me of myself sometimes lol. You are an amazing writer.

I loved the way your imagination allows your talents to slowly develop the story until your readers\fans can fell the love, passion and lust between the siblings.

I like how innocent this story is, just like how it was/is with Sis. We never thought what we did was wrong and we still don't, it's perfectly natural for close siblings to screw. Just one thing we never took chances of getting caught like they did

I was cumming so much. Thank you.

this is gr8 rly i never red b 4 but i couldnt stop!!

loved your story. I was so hard reading that I came when she swallowed his cum.

you need to write more.

monkey sex-great stuff-nice characters too-good story-thanks

omg that was one of the best storys i have ever read.

All through the 4 chapters my cock stayed hard. Finally I need some relief and jerked off a load of spunk. Loved your story. Need more.

Very, very hot but their parent's both having no functioning ocular or olfactory systems at the same time??? Sex is messy and neither parent noticed sopping wet sheets? Did they both share a really bad cold which knocked out their senses of smell? In a car??

But it is still hot!

Nice story, god sex scenes, but not really courting. Courting would have romance, walks, picnics, followers, and candy. Not just sex. Don't get me wrong I like the story. Just wish he was trying more to win her affection.

Loved it wish I could have had a sister like her, both make a beautiful couple

Mmmmmm, that got me hard.

Yep !

It was a very sexual read though it was titled wrong.

Fantastic storytelling by master story teller Erlikkhan. Outstanding characters and a carefully constructed plot that builds expertly throughout to a climactic conclusion. The excellence of the descriptive writing is marvelous. Five stars.

The writer has a fine imagination but is a little short of knowledge and experience. Only about 5% of a cumshot is from your balls so the churning you describe is nonsense and hymens don't pop. Fine for a younger audience I guess.