All Comments on 'Demon Rescuer'

Oh thank you for such a wonderful love story. I enjoyed it very much. I always believe that a good erotic story isn't about just the sex, it's the story itself.

Thank you very much for writing this story and I hope you write more. enjoy!

BardsLady

That was wonderfully enchanting. Drew me in right from the start and wouldn't let me pull my eyes away. Beautifully written and thought out. Please keep writing. -Stealthskajira

A new star is born!

Your style of writing come across of that of Sherri L.King and Lora Leigh and even a hint of Sherrilyn Kenyon. You must've read a lot of their books to write so well if not expertly.

Great storyline too.

Good work!

Wonderful story, couldn't stop until I had it finished. I'm looking forward to more demon stories!

I truly enjoyed your story. One of the best ones I've read in a long time. You have me very curious about all the "side" stories and how it came to be. I'd love to see more stories relating to Jasper and Lia, their pasts, present and future.

This is the first time I've ever responded to a story. Again, excellent read.

I had to read your story straight through too - You've written an erotic story but one with a well thought out storyline - I can't wait to read other stories from you. Well done.

Mirriam - UK

this is the first erotic story I have read, and that only through curiosity. I expected cheesey rubbish, but this was great!!! I will be looking out for more by this author.

waiting for more ..I would love to find out where it goes from there..please do write more...SOON!!

this was a very poor story. It made little reference to clit, anal, blowjob, clitoral climax, anal climax, etc.

i'm waiting for another chapter.i'm quite curious to find out what happens next

i thought this was an excellent story, i cant wait for the next chapter to come out. i loved the fact that it was romantic and had passion, not just hard core sex as many on this site do. i think you did a wonderful job and i will be looking for more chapters of this story.

EFING MORE PLEASE!!

Yeah, that.

Plz write more! this plot deserves to be continued.

This one needs to be turned into a longer story. Please continue it, Lia and Jasper deserves it.

the site won't let me rate it. But I give it 4.

it was way to short you mean spirited sadistic prick... i lie you're not mean just sadistic

Wow...just wow.

Oh my god, I loved this!

This was the best story I have read in a long time. Great hob and keep up the amazing work.

I'd like a more indepth chapter two. Why not go into multiple chapters. Loved the characters. The simplistic writing style is very appealing as well. Again, I ask, more please.

I have to say you snagged my interest immediately in the first paragraph!

Very reminiscent of the opening lines in Stephen King's The Dark Tower: The Gunslinger, with its ability to ensnare me almost immediately. I truly hope this isn't a "one and done".

I can already see this becoming a must read for multiple genres.

Definitely hoping and looking forward to this becoming an epic storyline

I truly enjoyed your first submission

Thank you!

I don't guess I'll let my hope build of reading more chapters of this story. Seems that's not going to happen. Just want to say that I did enjoy the story and it seemed to hold a lot of potential, just too bad though.