All Comments on 'Down the Chimney, Up Her Chute'

by TheTalkMan

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sassysasha89sassysasha89over 13 years ago
Nice and short

A wonderful short story although I do wonder about the aftermath that you usually do with the unfaithful husband, wronged wife and the hot slut mistress/new wife.

Just_the_tipJust_the_tipover 13 years ago
We owe you a Thank You card!

What a great gift! Can't wait for the next story.

qwikguyqwikguyover 13 years ago
Different Idea for a Story

What have you wrought! Now what do I do when I talk to my kids about Santa??? Also I have to make sure my wife doesnt get up in the night!

Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great story

Thanks again for your stories. I'm checking every day for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

The true Christmas Spirit.

<3

WarfolomeiWarfolomeialmost 12 years ago
Merry Christmas indeed...

This is so wrong, but it feels so right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Naughty Girl Fun

I've wanted to fuck Santa for years. THANK YOU for this.

MPsslavetommyMPsslavetommyabout 11 years ago
Maybe not real hot but...

Funny and quite "warm"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
awesome

You should continue series like this and make it longer. This was awesome. Lol

chipmonk9chipmonk9over 7 years ago
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I hope you write a sequeal for this!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
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Make a story about the girl kicking Ms. Claus to the curb and fully replacing her to where Ms. Claus dies since Santa doesn't love her anymore.

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6/4/24 A quick update… I’m still hard at work on my next story. The good news is that I’m past the main writing phase, and I’m working on clean-up and editing. That being said, this has become one of my longest stories, so I can’t make any promises in terms of timing, as ther...