All Comments on 'Heavy Liftin' Ch. 01'

I am eagerly looking forward to the next installment of this story. Very well written, and enthralling.

A wonderful story with a very good base and awesome detail, as only THE COWBOY can do it. Well done.

Good job on this story, im really looking foward to the rest of the chapters.

Thanks from a woman who is now soaking wet.

I have never had the privilege of reading you before Cowboy. If this is your first effort at Romance, I cannot wait to continue through the rest of your stories. Thank you for your efforts.

Based on your description of Jason, do you seriously expect us to believe that he would tell his little brother about all these little details? I think not. And after that oversized stretch of the imagination, would Frank really tell his friends about it?

but with possibilities.

the two main characters are painted as so different from each other it leaves doubts for their future, and the ending comment about her family makes it even more bleak.

A good romance story.

Maybe too sexually explicit if the story is being told by Frank, but hey, this is Lit, so that's fine.

What will happen in the next chapter?

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

More Please

North

I don’t understand why Frank needs to be the moderator, the teller of the story. Seems like it would be easier to just write the story in third-person and forget about Frank. He seems superfluous to me.

More about them please. Expand on g ed r fat6 try6to have him killed. Did they marry? More p lo ease