All Comments on 'Hermaphrodite Ch. 04'

More, more, more, how do I like it, how do I like it....5

Different from the usual R410a but hot. Looking forward to the next episode.

Cheers

SAGE

I might be the only one, but one thing that keeps constantly distracting me is the excessive use of the words "groan" and "grin". It feels like every action or thing the characters do or say is accompanied by either of those 2 words, which I don't think is necessary. Other than that, it was a pretty good chapter with great build up for what's to come.

Can’t wait to read part 5.

Mimi

Can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work

great story ...GRIN...:)

great story

It was a fun read but needs an actual ending. Unless there’s a part 2, it leaves you hanging.

This is a fascinating premise and, I think, rather well thought out. Don't stop now.

This is brilliant !

As much as I'm enjoying the storyline, the humorous banter and insults makes the whole thing so much nicer to read.

Really looking forward to Party 5 !

Why am I limited to 5 stars?...more, please!

Great story. Hope you continue it.

I do so hope you continue this story it is very well written and very erotic

Mmmmmmm

Please say you are writing more of this story

I loved it! Can't wait for #5.

Absolutely love these

Oh yes! Great story. I am going through and rereading your stories. This is the first time I’ve read Hermaphrodite and really enjoyed it. Your storytelling is amazing. Can’t wait for chapter 5

Well written series. Didn't think I'd enjoy it, but it turned out to be good. Too bad you never finished. Lowered the overall score.

Thanks for the amazing story. Will there be more parts?

Keep this going! Still lots of back story for both moms. Going on dates, college, "real sex", etc. Will moms get together? Skinny dipping together - moms and kids? Lots more fun to be explored.

Mfj

More please…..

more please

Interesting but left hanging at the ending

I agree, more please.

I love the trust and honesty between the characters. I also like the gentle descriptors for the different erogenous zones.

Keep up(pun intended?) the good story line!

I really hope at some point you continue the story.

Very nice story 5 stars, but you left us hanging please continue!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing! Easily 9ne of the best written and hottest stories on Lit. More please!

Superb series - deserves 6 stars - very well written.

I sincerely hope that there will be further episodes

I really hope you continue this story.

Fascinating. Please continue it!!!

Loved all 4 parts, please keep going

Please doe some more chapters in this series! I am sure we would all like to see how this relationship goes. THANKS

Very good, but want more. When will chapter 5 come out?

Great story. Next chapter(s) please.

I like how this story progresses. There is so much to learn from Luke and Janet and also from their mothers. Looking forward to further chapters to illuminate the wonders of their romance.

Where’s the rest of the story? How did Luke’s mother respond?

This is some excellent writing, I eas " sucked in" from the start, good story line and excellent character development. Please, please, please continue and write some more. Thanks for the story so far.

Please finish this one.

Please do finish this story, it's fascinating.

You have to finish this story!

HERMAPHRODITE CH. 04 when will CH 05 and ending coming

Great story. I hope you can get around to finishing it.

Please add some more chapters, the story line is great. Looking forward to reading more of this story.

I'm really enjoying this story and hope someday you continue. The mothers were together for 3 1/2 hours, something good must have happened.

You should do at least a chapter 5 on this story, they should consumate their relationship, And college stories would be great. Lots of room for this story to grow, Even with their moms!