All Comments on 'Howdy Neighbor Ch. 02'

Very plausible, interesting story development

There's a fine line between detail and tedium. Unfortunately this author has no problem crossing it...over and over...

Open your legs, not your heart is a pretty good mindset for a whore without a conscience.

Talk about? Why? According to a study by the Bertalsman Foundation, 98% of all partnerships that attempted swaping sharing swinging or cuckolding break within two years. Main reasons jealousy and / or one of the partners loses respect for the other! 2:98 is a rate that every pro will avoid, but the idiots on this side cheer for it!

This was the literary version of unflavored jello.

Dude - if you are going to make Scrabble a centerpiece of the story at least get the details right. You always have 7 tiles in Scrabble until there are no more tiles to pick up. You can't not put down a word and pick up another tile. I don't think I have even played a scrabble game in which somebody hasn't been able to make a word - at least not until the last couple of rounds.

26thNC - as you obviously hate such stories why do you read them? And if you did read the story you obviously didn't read it very well - which one of the ladies was a "whore without a conscience"? (and why doesn't this equally apply to the men?). None of the protagonists seemed to be without a conscience - they all cared for the emotional and physical needs of their foursome. I suggest you leave Literotica as you obviously don't have any empathy for the genre or the openness to the world it represents.

Anonymous, I do indeed hate these stories, and I believe that any woman who participates in swinging is in fact a whore. The idea that she must be a “ whore without a conscience “ is the only way that such a person could live among normal people. This also applies to the men, as both are hiding their true nature from the world. Your suggestion that I leave Literotica is rejected, although you are correct in your observation that I have no empathy for the people in this type story and the “lifestyle” it represents. There are many good stories in LW, although not nearly enough to drown out this type garbage, or the even more fulsome cuckold stories. If you like this type work, then by all means support it. But I don’t like it and I will comment as I see fit. I suggest that you avoid my comments, and thus avoid the pain that they cause you. There are hundreds of anonymous, so no one can direct a comment at you keyboard cowards. Your comments don’t bother me at all, but I will answer you as much as it is possible to answer nobody.

Well paced and interesting. Some grammatical errors. Some details like the scrabble game rules could be better explained, especially for those who do play and know the game well. It could use a bit more personal insight into the various characters thinking, but not needed yet. This will be relevant when the dramatic crises hit. The ramping up of drama is done well. In my opinion, bringing the emotional aspects to a boil slowly is the better approach. Good cliff hanger ending again.

Wow. Tough crowd.

I love the stories and the thought that has gone into them. It feels very real and exciting. Please keep writing.

I'm ready for the next chapter