by Transfix
WHY AM I NOT IN THIS STORY?!
I DEMAND TO BE IN THIS STORY AS A YOUNG TRANSEXUAL GIGOLO!!!
i am ver surpise. you have made a story base on somthing yet that poeple have posted
...point of view had been consistent. There was too much shifting of person between second (you) and third (he/she). In many ways, though, it was very clever.
Cheers,
Lalenya :^)
I wish your story had been longer, w/ either more sex encounters or longer ones. After I got into the theme I enjoyed it very much, and it sounded like a dream you may have had.