All Comments on 'Pleasure Doll'

Creepy and powerful.

Your witchery with words was never more prominently on display. An epic story from one if the genius-class writes around. Thank you for the beautiful story, my love. I am very, very sorry about the premature posting. Randi.

I saw your name and started reading. Never stopped.

Great story, well plotted and wonderfully written. GirlintheMoon is one of a kind. Great writing!

Wonder if I'll sleep tonight?

This was a great, creepy read. Thanks!

This may be the best Erotic Horror piece i've read in here....ever, Thanks GITM.

That was absolutely great!

Well written, well told and with a very well done Twilight Zone twist.

You could do a sequel called Valley of the Dolls. This was one of the hottest stories you have written. Just superb.

i'm... confused. you have a scene where Mark takes the doll.

she comes back that night, makes him promise not to throw her away, then leaves again.

how did he break the contract? is the phone call from mark supposed to let us know the scene where he took her away the first time wasnt real? rob never throws her out again, she leaves of her own accord.

please know this isnt meant as critical, i just think i misunderstood something somewhere

That was so original and well written!

Just read again; crazy, scary and so erotic. Timeless piece — nothing lost in revisiting; in fact, grows on you. You are creative.

Convinced me to stay away from them dolls! )