All Comments on 'Rayne Ch. 05'

that was hot and sweet at the same time.Keep up the good work!

This story keeps eye getting better with each chapter. I like how you had Rayne seducing Gabriela. I also like the way that you had Ryane becoming Gabriela's protector. I like how you had her tell Ryane this story about her parents and Maria's visions about them. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Each chapter has gotten better.