by Pro_Ball_Player
I want to see how Susan uses and abuses Jan. Forcing Jan to expose herself and be spanked doing it.
OMG WOWwwwwwwwww GREAT READ .we always wished YOU would co writing GREAT tinue Spanking stories bout Jan PLEASEeeeeeee Keepup the GREAT StorTY Janeties w/perhaps Susan geeting on too Ty Janet&Dean
Too long of a wait, my friend, but this was so good, I can give you a break on the two year delay. Only bad thing was that I was ready to cum on page 2, with 2 more pages to go! Damn you. It was smoking hot!!!!!!
Hey, you got everything for a good story together. It is a pleasure to read. Just continue.
A Fan
As always you bring gat my cock hard with your writings. Love them all
Helluva series!! I'm going to give it my best effort to write a spanking story...I thoroughly enjoyed reading your's.
JUst wanted you to know what a fantasy ! SOmething I could picture myself doing and I have now thanks to your story.
I Was so hot and horny I made my boyfriend come over and well you can imagine what a relief it was for me.So I sent your story to him he will be back soon making fantasies of our own.so thank you
Dominantly yours
I think the spanking you gave Jan was absolutely terrific but I think after you had sent her home you should have gone back to deal with Susan. My wife is called Susan and I have wonderful times spanking her. It would be nice if you could turn the story so that it reflects as being my wife. She would enjoy reading it and I would enjoy carrying ou/copying whatever you do to her. She wears tartan mini skirts with black tights and usually bikini briefs in nylon material underneath. she has a 34b chest and I apologise in advance for the limited size but in a platform bra they look fabulous. Write soon as I cant bear to wait to hear what you willo do to her when you return to the shop. Strip and Spank her hard.
Thank you for making me so horny tonight.t
Wow you have one hell of an imagination. I find myself wondering if you are like this for real! woohooo awesum story
My panties soaked right thru in moments, couldn't stop playing with myself as I read your story, you had me!
Amazing series, left me ripping at my own knickers...soaking before I could finish the page, very vivid...I will definitely be returning for your prose & insisting on a spanking from my boyfriend - he has alot to live up to.
You wrote a good one with plenty of action that would make any reader feel the same...hot! Your story flowed nicely and was easy to read and visualize, what fun! Write more like this one you have a knack for it.
I would love your story to include more embarrassment, like Jan standing in front of you and peeing, giving her an enema (most humiliating), making her stand in the corner with her pants down.
Excellent story...I really enjoy that Susan became involved. This should be a short film really...
What an exciting story. I couldn't stop reading. The part that Susan played was especially powerful. I just wish she could have spanked Jan a little longer. Panties played a role, but not quite as much as I like. But that doesn't change anything -- it was a highly enjoyable story.
Absolutely LOVED this story! Couldn't stop reading once I started! Fantastic work! More please!!!?
awesome writer total awsome story would love you to finish some other stories written some leave you hanging and no completion
I never would agree to let someone else spank my gorgeous wife. But here it was erotic. Totally awesome in the story line, build up andfinale. Damn good writing.
I do not usually like these stories but this was beautifully written and sensitively portrayed for pleasure with no one hurt.
Many thanks!
A product of a diseased and perverted mind.
Real bad this!
Loved it one of my favorite stories on literotic I would love to see more of it continue the story thanks
The technical term for external genitalia (pussy) is 'vulva'. The vagina is the channel between vulva and womb, not whatever you happen to want it to be at the time.. Look it up on wikipedia.
I can't give this series enough kudos without repeating what's already been said! Suffice it to say that you have just been added to my Favorite Authors!
Please keep writing and gracing us with the product of your talent, your skill, and your imagination/experience!
X-Man
That was the best spanking story I have ever read. All the way through you keep raising the bar without resorting to insulting the woman or disrespecting her, rather she says what she wants and she gets it. Still room for a further chapter, maybe with Susan being spanked?