All Comments on 'The Small, Black Death'

by PrinceThelo

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reader38reader38over 15 years ago
hmm?

dumb dumb dumb and racist to boot. a black woman wouldn't have you.

robgirl83robgirl83over 15 years ago
WTF

Great Job at bashing black women...I mean is there anything else you may have left out about what you don't think about black women?? Everyone has a preference but damn white women aren't the only beautiful women in the world.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Reasonably amusing,

a nice twist on la petit mort. I think the previous commentors say more about themselves and their own views, there is little to offend anyone in this story. My only thought was on his use of speed before sex. Surely coke would be more rock and roll. Also easier to maintain an erection with coke. Looking forward to his tryst with the Japanese nurse. Thanks. -- UK CYNIC

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Damn!

"there is little to offend anyone in this story" Ive met with ignorance before but that comment really is breathtakingly insensitive. Ive got nothing against your writing style per se but practically categorising a whole race as looking or acting a certain way is racist. You don't like black girls, fair enough but denouncing them in the way you have is just plain disrespectful and misinformed. Perhaps if you had met every black girl in the world, it would make you more entitled to make such perjorative assumptions, until then keeping your obtuseness to yourself would benefit us all.

billc393billc393over 15 years ago
Had potential...

Beautiful woman, Incredible BJ.. nice "la petite mort" twist...<br><br>But the downright nasty commentary about black (and oriental) women was a definite erection killer!<br><br>I happen to think that women of every color and variety nature has to offer are beautiful!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Bill does protest too much I think,

after supposedly being so put off that his cock lost the will to live he bravely reads on for another page and a half until the blow job scene. Sorry for giving out the ending, yes our hero cums for Holland. As for my fellow Brit, the Guardian reading pc flag carrier, lighten up. This was a well written and light hearted piece. If you have to look for offence in everything you are probably on the wrong site. -- UK CYNIC

SerranoirSerranoirabout 15 years ago
I am sure this story raise some eye brows

I think this story would have been best served if Bill had went and stayed gone when he came. I don't think he would be missed by anyone.... ever.

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