by Decayed Angel
This was the the worst srory that i have ever read when it comes to these sex stories.
Dude, this was *so* bad. So, so poor. I haven't laughed so much in ages - I can't believe you ended by describing pubic hairs caught in a zipper.
Dude!!!
Oh, don't listen to those two--I loved this story, very imaginative and descriptive.
You write quite well. I'll give you THAT, anyway. I, along with thousands of others, visit this site in search of Erotica, however. I can go to the Library, if I want a good short story. Try to include some sensuous material in your next entry, Okay! :( Bad.
IT SUCKED !BIG TIME WHAT A WASTE OF READING TIME .
What an odd story. I would never have thought of it. A bit erotic. A little sad. Different. Good job. JudyLee