All Comments on 'Battle Cry'

Beautifully written RF,

wonderful imagery,

Temporal fusion, igniting within times tunnel.

Eons of avid worship, trenching off to battle.

Screaming battle cry, screeches across

ticking of the clock.

A superb piece!

~ Jenn

I especially liked the wordplay in the last paragraph and elsewhere.

strong powerful write here... loved the intensity of the work.. and the message freezes within the heart of all who take the time to feel this poem!

mentioned in the sunday reviews

du~

I felt this one down to my stripes.

has iced me over.........great imagery in that......i certainly feel exactly as you do with the intensities of feelings of all that is oil......overall nicely done....don

...got a hold of me.

ty,bd

no need to let go

Nicely done imagery

Starts off modestly and

Becomes increasingly gruesome.

Once experienced ~ no one entirely escapes the memories of the devastation of war.

allows light and air to enter, TK U MLJ LV NV