All Comments on 'Heart Keeper'

by Many Feathers

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AnnaVenus69AnnaVenus69about 18 years ago
My love, my heart

You are the most amazing person I have ever had the privilege to meet. Your poem is beautiful, but not as beautiful as you.You blow my mind!

Thank you so much for my new name, I will wear it humbly and with pride. Your sweet heart will always be safe with me, sheltered and nurtured...as will you!

I love you

xxxxx

your Anna, your Heart Keeper

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
heart felt

I truely enjoyed this read, (~_~)

PatHous56PatHous56about 18 years ago
Wonderful

Great feelings expressed in this sweet love poem. Lovers, though apart, remain together as one. Patricia

EmJ0385EmJ0385about 18 years ago
A Love Poem!!

So wonderful---these feelings of love you speak of here---where two truly feel as one.

OSoBuffOSoBuffabout 18 years ago
Well said!!!

The way I feel about the person who reflects me and truly sees me!!! Wonderful words that say it better than I ever thought. tks

CaPic267CaPic267about 18 years ago
So seductive

With words so fine I could get lost in your spell and never know it...or mind it. A nice soft romantic touch in a hard often bitter world. CP

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
~~

So many touching romantic writes between yours and Anna's. Sharing your feelings before your entire public. Hope the story never ends.

VolupiaVolupiaabout 18 years ago
I am envious

of the love between you and your Anna, which you so generously share with us all. May you always love like this, may you never stop sharing. (xxx)

Beam_of_liteBeam_of_liteabout 18 years ago
You have

found your gift Many Feathers and I have found mine.For each of us to find the one who we will share the rest of our lives with at almost the same time...well all I can say is that the spirits have each brought a special sunbeam into our lives.My wonderful friend my heart is happy for you.

sybilrosesybilroseabout 18 years ago
To trust your heart to someone

What a specail gift you give. Love the poem !

champagne1982champagne1982about 18 years ago
ahh love

No one can argue with the sentiment of your poem and I enjoyed the way you told the story. My one drawback with it was that your rhymes weren't very subtle.

I hope you develop this lyrical poetry skill you have further. There is marvellous potential hiding in your muse.

Carrie

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