I Despair

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fieryjen
fieryjen
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Is the pain I cause you so consuming
That you have to lash out in return
And let blind rage take over your thinking
Are the feelings you have so corrupted
Because I can’t see love in your eyes
And I can’t see the man I once knew
When did desperation take over your thoughts
Did I fail you so badly, so soon
If I cried, would you hold me, and rock me to sleep
Or would you leave me there to despair
I am trying to find you, but all I can see
Is the man you became, full of anger

fieryjen
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NirvanadragonesNirvanadragonesabout 17 years ago
I like it

It's straight-forward and to the point, and brave, and true. And all of that, beautifully written.

MagicaPracticaMagicaPracticaabout 17 years ago
Well done...

So well evoked. Brava.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
The flame..

is flickering as the lights grow dim..and barely a spark can be seen. Is it too late, has he changed too much?

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A too common result. When the chase is over and the conquest complete, Prince Charming retires, replaced by the Lord of Darkness.

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