All Comments on 'I Despair'

by fieryjen

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A too common result. When the chase is over and the conquest complete, Prince Charming retires, replaced by the Lord of Darkness.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
The flame..

is flickering as the lights grow dim..and barely a spark can be seen. Is it too late, has he changed too much?

MagicaPracticaMagicaPracticaabout 17 years ago
Well done...

So well evoked. Brava.

NirvanadragonesNirvanadragonesabout 17 years ago
I like it

It's straight-forward and to the point, and brave, and true. And all of that, beautifully written.

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