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by JBEdwards

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 4 years ago
No Madeline or Proust

But very well done, JB! Five stars! More to follow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Lovely poem!

The difference between men and women is such.Women loose their lust too soon. Dirty old men go on forever. But some women still have it and are fucked even on their last day. Sexual allure can still trump age. Show a little tit and thigh once more and prove me right. No willing women ever lost a lover because of her age, assuming good health.

LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMeover 4 years ago

Great memory to hold on to. I have one or two of those myself, but I've never put them to rhyme. I really enjoyed the cadence of this one too. It had a really upbeat rhythm and meter. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Big difference between oggbashan and... This. In comparison the rhyming comes off as immature rather than a device.

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