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Dusk falls
Sorrow smiles
Day dies .....
Dawn breaks
Birds sing
Life awakes
Sun begins ......
Agree with others. Very nice. Intended or not, the "s" endings in 6 of the 8 short lines enhance the sound of this short poem with just enough variation in it from the two lines that don't end with the letter "s.".
...but at least it is simple and scans - (yay!) - well done.