- Erotic Poetry
- Shy-cue
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Click hereFingers that glide
across stout muscle and bone
a needing moan
passions swirl
in a shy look and smile
an obvious cue
Goddess of desire
fulfilled in filling pumps
innocence disappear
- COMMENTS
Bill Dadaabout 19 years agoI agree with Syn, I really like the poem, but the last 3 lines lost me. They seem almost there, but not quite.
BD
Anonymousabout 19 years agoInteresting style here.. simple complexity both in the style and in the subject... A felt a floating with the read.. and the essence of all who held the innocent candle that is put out with a sigh..
Du~
Mentioned in the Sunday on Monday reviews..
Bridget69about 19 years agothe shy approach can be even more revealing than a bolder one.
Anonymousabout 19 years agosimple poem says a lot.
But this:
Goddess of desire
fulfilled in filling pumps
innocence disappear
Could be tweaked a bit into perfect. Thanks for the read!
Syn~
