All Comments on 'The Birth of Mankind'

Being fond of the idea by my favourite philosopher that poems constitute or generate their own language, I can easily find this exemplified here. Well done.

(to be read aloud:)

'though I had sworn by my heart

to never complain about art

now I do and that's a start

a poem's a river that flows

yours got no rhythm that goes

try it again but don't push to hard!

MfG Tom

LMAO