All Comments on 'The Flame Within'

Well that just burned!

very hot little read.

Good work.

Thanks.

~ J

Welcome to Literotica

~ J

yet warmly romantic. This was a well written first poem you penned for Lit and I for one deeply enjoyed the piece. It is difficult to write poetry in the rhyme format, but you did so with no stifled or forced wording <wink> I hope to see more of this caliber soon from you. And now I will join Jennifer C. in welcoming you to the Lit poetry side of the neighborhood! <smile>

Welcome wagon Vixxx

hot first submission.