All Comments on 'The Wanderer'

I like this, it has some highs,

"will most truly understand love's meaning,

and what was missed in challenged lives."

some lows

"now broken shards." (get rid of it)

various degrees of faults inbetween

"love is the answer, and how to is the question.

He wandered farther and deeper into his mind,

affirming that the more righteous people became,

the farther from God and spirit they fell."

but i like this

Your poem has been mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.

this from a few years ago...it touched me then and now...wish you would write more....lol/blue