All Comments on '100 Centimetres - Experience 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yup, liked it.

Off to a good start.

yowseryowserover 5 years ago
Intriguing

Interesting premise, it will pose challenges to continue. Second-person narration is almost impossible to pull off successfully. We will need to know much more, however cryptically about your 'master,'

Submisky35Submisky35over 5 years ago
Short but sweet

Very well written short story. Everything described nicely. Look forward to Experience 02....99 more centimeters coming?

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Passing bells and sculptured angels, cold and monumental... Dreamer of many things, procrastinator of many others. Soul was sold for my love of music. A submissive at heart. A cold, harsh ice queen on the surface.

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