All Comments on '24'

Just as I remember it.

Right there with your best. Keep them coming.

This was positively amazing!! Even better than I had expecting. You do not cease to amaze me, my dear. What am I in store for with the next story I read?? *grins*

Very enjoyable story. And quite believable. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

I'd like to see also an account of Tina's debut performance as 'the girl next door' and talk about the other newbies he uses. The drama of dismissing Misty and Brad. Getting Andrea in a movie as an Evil Step-Sister who cums prodigeously on rindercella's face, obviously making a mess of her. And Crystal Sweet (stupid name, by the way) as rindercella. Who fucks Prince Charming and his father the King anally with the last shot of John Edward's quart of cum flowing out of her still gapeing asshole. This is a great account of a day in the life of a director in the adult entertainment industry. There are some grammatical errors and you might want to brush up on your punctuation (emphasis on parenthesis), but its a wonderful story. Of course, Stacy does become Andrea's assistant and possibly plays an Evil Step-Sister. Andrea, who thinks she can't act, and Stacy, who has never acted, might do well. Its much easier to play the bad guy than the good guy. Evil comes naturally to humans, we have to learn how to be good.

Why publish rubish?

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