All Comments on 'A Fresh Relationship'

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Realdeal123Realdeal123about 2 months ago

It would be more interesting if he doesn't choose something predictable like picking options 2 to making story become more interesting and give Jane the reality check that everything won't going her way

Lovemaster123Lovemaster123about 2 months ago

Ho! Come on! Generic The cuck idiot and selfish evil slut with no redeemed quality again? Have some imagination!

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsabout 2 months ago

Love the willing aspect of this start,great potential!

Cuckysubby47Cuckysubby47about 2 months ago

Damn..what a plot... eagerly waiting for the future chapters...I really hope this is a long one..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Is a good start and well written. But for me, it is to short. Hope, there is more from the author in future.

AnonymousAnonymous28 days ago

Part 2????

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