All Comments on 'A Good Student'

Your idea is fine but reading what you wrote is very hard because you lack the skills to write a sentence properly. Your verb tenses for example need to stay the same yet you use different tenses in the same sentence....good grief.

The description of Jake keeps jumping back and forth between a timid, inexperienced boy and a stud who is in total control. Pick one or the other and stick with it.

I couldn't even get past the 2nd paragraph. You need to get an editor. Based on your inconsistent use of verb tense, I'm guessing that English is not your first language.

your grammars are broken, get them fixed!!!

Nice story. Both of them trying to tease and torment each other