All Comments on 'A Little Discipline'

Another great story.

For once, you’ve presented a story that could easily begin a journey of discovery for this girl. One that will cause her to grow, and change, and probably develop a multi tiered relationship Paul that could lead them both to become someone different than they were at the start.

But, of course, that would require an author capable of pathos and humanity. Not likely.

ASHON: “And there! Another meaningless wank worthy tale. My job here is done.”

Do you actually know how to write a story that isn't about you raping someone, then pretending it's okay because they end up 'liking it'? Because if you did, I might enjoy reading that.

A reasonably short story that entertains the majority of readers, but not the critics. Good job well written maybe you should warm people on this site of the content in advance.

Having just discovered your writing, I'd like to address the previous comments if you'll be kind enough to indulge me. To the first commentor, There are warnings on Literotica, and Ashon posts trailing proofs about the stories being fantasy, not reality. To the second commentor, I wonder at your idiotic comment...if you don't like his stories, why have you read multiple ones?? And why are you reading only the Non-Consent/Reluctance themed stories?? Lastly, Ashon, the ONLY slightly critical thing I can say about your stories, is you may want to engage a proof reader, it seems, by the look of the writing, that you type quite a bit faster than perhaps you should. PLEASE keep writing these, you're amazing!!