All Comments on 'A Marginal Victory'

Superb story! This is so much a fantasy of mine, and is a great demonstration of how you don't need pain and violence to establish control/submission. I've just written an opening para for a story idea of mine, and there are just so many parallels

Superb story! This is so much a fantasy of mine, and is a great demonstration of how you don't need pain and violence to establish control/submission. I've just written an opening para for a story idea of mine, and there are just so many parallels

OMG....must have more

Good start.No mention of domination before I read it though.Pity.Spoilt a good tale.If you must write again please just keep to lesbian sex.No domination.Domination is so cruel even if some people do get off on it.

Thanks.