All Comments on 'A Night I Can't Escape From'

give me a break. he is turned on, why the whining. its a turn off.

Killing himself as opposed to writing this shit ?

THAT would be time well spent

Is this loving wives or nonconsent/reluctance? They had to shackle him and threaten his wife to get him to go along with it, so maybe he really doesn't want it.

This is just crap!

The plot did not support the outcome you describe. Out hero is described as being very aware of what is happening and seems unable to react in any convincing way. This same brain freeze seems to affect many men in these "please cuckhold me, I am my own worst ememy" stories.

This is a new low in the slut wife/wimp husband category.

and at some point they will have t olet him loose ...at which point he can then show them how pathetic they really are ...after he kilss them both and fucks his wife in every hole and then beats her black and blue with the hands of the other man ..he can then tell the authorities that they raped his wife and she in revenge killed them ...of which she probably better agree ...oh yes all hubby has to do is fuck her all his cum has t ogo down her throat ...all the evidence will be in her cunt ...with the drugs in her system they might figure she didnt even know she killed them ....with there reputation who would disagree with their version...and look then his wife will know hes not pathetic but the asshole was ...barb also... people like that deserve death ...so then he and beth can go home and fuck for ever again ...but she needs to know that from now on hubby gets to fuck other women as she now realizes he is top dog...well this works as good as the authors shit

What is it going to be, a wimp of a husband or pay-back time for being tied to the chair while wife is raped 'drugs".

go to jail fighting or thinking to much.see what men have become wimps,i wouldn't go to war with three fourth of the men this country knowing how they defend their women.let any and every thing take over their family.useless excuse for men in this country.about as bad as the brits, surrendering to iran that what the american men are becoming wimps and sissyboys.

Ditto, ditto, this is really a new low in this sub-basement genre of slut/whore wife, & wimpy balless hubby. Plus from a wrting standpoint, it is mindless, w/out any real plot, or story device. In short, a sheer waste to time to even purview.

You write pure shit.always have, always will.

First time I have commented. This is total crap.

HuwR

Your needles stuck writer - stuck on the helpless self disrespect of male humiliation.<P>

At this stage - and not perhaps - you need to do something to regain your self respect as well as respect from those who know you write this self degrading crap. You need help - soon!<P>

Your addiction to the self cuck fetish should be as obvious to you by now - as it is to us. A sad waste of time and talent on the very few sicko's like yourself.

Hmm, how does jail time sound to you, let them all go to jail. It seems she showed you in one night with a stranger how much contempt and hatred she held for you. Now you can realize what you thought was love was payment for providing her and her spawn a place to live and a lifestyle she enjoyed. Time to leave was earlier, time for divorce is now. She is now a slut, nothing more nothing less. She is a druggie slut. Not your wife, not the mother of her children, not her families daughter. She is slut with no respect for you, her marriage, her children, or with the sex involved, no respect for herself. Of course people will talk of getting her thru this problem and taking her back, reconciliation is what people want. Unfortunately all that does is provide you another opportunity to be betrayed in the future. Once a cheater, always a cheater. A murderer may be sorry they murdered but they are still a murderer. A slut is always a slut even when sorry. Even when having anothers child, even when getting treatment for STDS, AIDS, and/or drugs. Whatever allowed this to happen is part of her personality, a defect in their mental and or physical state. Not your problem hers and hers alone.

Just awful...

If there was anything to this pathetic husband at all when he was finally let loose he would find a way to catch them and tie them up and skin them all alive with a dull rusty edge weapon. Then pour oil on what was left and set them on fire. This writer is a pathetic wimp.

let me guess, you a fucking virgin, aren't you? you have absolutely no concept of what is erotic, sexy, or entertaining to a normal person. why is it all you ignorany authors write about these special magic drugs that turn women into whores???? It doesn't fucking exist! and your desire to have it exist is sad! Want a drugged up woman, poor 15 shots down her throat and you'll get the same thing, a semi-passed out sack... is that something that turns you on?

Please, just remove youself from the gene pool just in case you get laid sometime.

The last line says it all.

Because he's a moron along with the other detractors of this fine story. Great work author. Don't let the morons persuade you otherwise.

Really good stuff. I loved it.

Enough said.

Very dick hardening! The shackles were a nice unexpected touch not usually found in this kind of story. I'd love to experience something like this myself!

walk out. Then lock her out. Simple, divorce ends problems like this. Drugs dont make a woman hate their husband. Women with suppressed anger hate their husbands.

nonconsent rape story, if she is drugged and cant say no it is rape, needs to end his need for self debasement.

you've been removed from the gene pool. Do you understand that when someone reads this absolute peice of crap, all it makes them want to do is kill YOU, the sick, fucking loser of an author who thought this story had some quality that others would want to read. Weaponx, do you really think your identity is hidden? Are you that nieve?

the entire story is just silly, I could barely get through the initial conversation... it was written like two mentally disturbed people were talking to each other... none of the conversation made any sense. The wife gets upset at her husband because SHE allowed a stanger to grope her? Then she gets up and leaves her husband and follows the complete strangers... yep, once again the author is TOO FUCKING LAZY to take the time to flush out something believable. At that point in time, I as your reader thinks the wife is a disgusting self centered peice of shit, so I no longer CARE what happens to her. You story, no longer has ANY VALUE to your reader. Either take the time to make your story REAL, bring your reader into your writing, or JUST DON'T FUCKING POST!

Grow a set of balls and at least fught for your woman.

This is bad real bad. I do not know if you should try again. But if you do I'll read cause you can not write one worst then this one. Good luck!!

This is not the story nor the author I wanted to comment on. I hit the wrong keys. SORRY!!

Beth is being raped by the asshole with the open marriage. What the fuck. I hope this gets fixed in ch. 2.

Worthless piece of shit

Ignore the bull 5h1t negative comments. Just b/c a majority don't understand or accept the submissive fetish doesn't mean that it is bad. Those of us (yes a minority) that do appreciate your work, applaud your effort and want to read more.

So less than half an inch in diameter? This guy really is a pencil dick.

When they let him free he could have them arrested for restraining him or he could just beat the A-H and smash his nuts.

WTF This bullshit of Beth blaming her husband for not stopping HER LETTING Nick feel her up on the dance floor is bullshit! As soon as she got back to the table after the "dance",he should have dragged her ass out of there and read her the riot act! Now,it's a divorce. (Why do 2 young kids have to suffer through this shit in so many of these stories?!)

I was enjoying this story until the verbal abuse started. I'd live for a guy with a huge cock like this to screw my wife but he'd better respect me while he's doing it.

just another fucking stupid cuckold story .. thats all there is on this site .. stupid writers don't know how to write

Nuff said

Another story about a wimp cuckold by a true cuckold assswipe. literotica should have a separate section for cuckold/wife watching/ sharing stories or have them all boldly labeled.

reading.

This story went from being dumb to stupid in an instant. He got mad when he saw Beth let Nick touch her all over and he got a hard-on? Really? He got so mad that he got a hard-on? And then he couldn't answer his wife? His own wife? Really? Why couldn't he just tell her. "Lets go home and I'll explain everything on the way there." Why couldn't he call his wife over when he got shackled and before Nick went to talk to him? How did Nick know about that private room and that it was soundproof? And of course, everybody carries ectasy and a tube of astroglide when they go dancing. I think he had lost her even before they met Nick and Barbara. sorry I read this story it really did start out good but it just went downhiil fast.

The death threat and the supposed rape threat (apart from currently taking place without the beating) was said as a 'I could do' not be quiet or I will.

Hopefully he'll beat nick into the next category.

Almost total dislike for this totally shit story. There are a couple things who liked it, but then there is always trash around. This is one of the worst stories I've seen. This author must have been stoned when he wrote this.

Drivel.

Technically well written. A good mix of good dialogue and narration. But — as someone else said — drivel.

3-stars

When Beth touched her husband's hard-on, she essentially accused him of being a perv. That was his last chance to admit to Beth that Barbara had been stimulating his dick. In my book he was not "an innocent victim".

Excerpt from the story:

Quote: ... I felt yet another twinge in my heart, but a larger twinge in my pants. Barbara was now openly massaging my crotch and snuggling up to me... Unquote.

What I did not like was: (a) when Beth was given a drink laced with ecstasy & (b) when her husband was chained to the armchair in a locked room, which is called "unlawful confinement" in some jurisdictions.

However, i am a big fan of stories where the husband obides by his own self-imposed principle: "if I come to the party with my wife, I don't leave the party without her no matter what."

Pitch a fit. Scream, yell, yank at the cuff. Unless they kill him, the minute he gets lose, call the cops. The cuff is there. The bitches fingerprints are on it. The ligature marks from him struggling against the cuff are there. The drugs are in his wife's system and in the glass she drank from. Nick and Barbara are going to prison and he's getting a free divorce. Horrible ending.

1 star

Watching helplessly the show of wife and the stranger is hot.

I wish my wife does it before me.

I would have came in my pants hearing my wife say those words.

They'd better kill me, because once loose...

Unreadable grammatically. Interesting premise and starts out favourably but quickly turns. No suspension of disbelief here, classless.

Someone would die after I would be loose,cause Id cut his cock off.

Total bullshit. If the couple had actually went out for a great night together. They would never let themselves get into a situation like this, unless ths is what they were looking for to start with. These writers start a story out leading the readers to believe that a very virtious couple just go out for a good time and then they both turn into sluts and wimps. No man, and i mean No Man would let his wife get out on a dabce floor and humiliate him like this. And no decent wife would allow a stranger feel her up on the floor. Again total bullshit. This writer probably goes home at night and eats his wifes shit just to keep her happy. He has to be a pussy.

What a pathetic little pussy. No man tolerates this.

You're a pathetic writer...

My wife Violet and I used to role-play and some bondage. I thought I made it clear that it was to be between her and never to happen in real life. The last time we played with bondage she was in charge. She had tied me to an old antique chair she had gotten from her grandmother. She had put her panties in my mouth then took pantyhose and pulled them down over my head then wrapped tape around my neck. While she was laying on the bed she played with a dildo smaller than I am.I thought that was strange. All the stories about bbc LOL. She got off the bed and just as she came to me the door bell rang. She grabbed a robe and said I'll be right back. She returned with Harry Ellis a coworker hers. I instantly started shaking my head no and I knew that my face had to show anger.she sat on the bed with the robe still on it was tied it was long so unless she had showed Harry before he hadn't seen her naked. She patted the bed telling Harry to have a seat. I was fighting with all my strength to get loose. I didn't really want to destroy the chair but I damn sure didn't want her to destroy our marriage. My last attempt I broke loose. Part of the chair was still tied to me. Harry decided that it was time for him to leave. I was chasing him and he tripped falling down the stairs. He got up and ran out the door. I was yelling if he was ever around my wife or family again I would beat the shit out of him also if I ever heard of him ever telling anyone I would beat him. I turned around and there was Violet I went after her she was yelling I'm sorry it will never happen again I wasn't going to do anything with Harry I was just teasing you. When we reached the bedroom I grabbed her put her over my lap and whipped her. She did actually cry. I told her to go clean up. I was very upset but we worked things out and I said we are done with role-play and bondage. Things went back to normal.

My wife Jennifer and I had been married for 5 years. We couldn't go on our anniversary because of other commitments. We went a week later to our capital city about 1 and a half hour away. We knew of a few clubs and decided on one we had enjoyed in the past. When we got there it was permanently closed. As we were headed to our second choice we seen another club that we hadn't heard of and decided to check it out. It was busy but we found a table for four and sat. We ordered drinks and watched a little while before we started dancing. We sat back down at our table and watched others dancing. As we watched I noticed another couple and the man was looking our direction about every time I glanced in their direction. We started dancing again and I seen them come out on the floor. He was keeping an eye on us I thought it was a little off. We danced a while and sat back down. The couple also walked to their table picked up their drinks and came to our table and introduced themselves asking if they could join us. Not wanting to be rude we alowed them to set with us. They seemed friendly and we talked about this and that. Neil the man asked if I'd mind if he danced with my wife. I said that he would have to ask her. He did and Jennifer said she would. They got up and went to the dance floor. The wife Karen moved over close to me and we started talking. I had the feeling that she was trying to push my buttons. It didn't take all that long for her to put her hand on my leg. My mind got to going in several different directions. I thought the they were probably swingers and I for sure wasn't interested but didn't want to cause trouble in this city I'm just a country boy. She asked if I would like to dance? I said I needed to use the restroom and I'd be back. I excused myself and headed to the restroom. Just before I entered our waitress said sir I stopped. She introduced herself she was an undercover police officer. She asked if I would go along with her so that they could catch the couple with us. The couple had been accused of druging people and robbing them. I said sureif we were not endangered. She said that there were 3 other officers in the crowd. She wanted me to wait for a few minutes and she would let me know when to return to the table. Shortly she returned and said that the Dedra had put something in our drinks. I asked who was Dedra? She said the female at our table. I said that she was introduced as Karen. She said that I should sit for a short and ask Dedra to dance but not dance to long and try to switch back to my wife. Also that we could drink our drinks because they would switch our drinks for new drinks. Away I went and took Dedra or whoever she was to dance. I danced 2 and on the second I moved in Jennifer's and Neil's direction. I said Neil I'd want to dance with Jennifer and we will meet back at the table. Ok buddy he replied. I thought buddy my ass. Dancing with Jennifer I thought man we were lucky that the police were there this could have been bad.I I told Jennifer that we would visit a little while longer maby dance a little more and head out. She said ok but sounded a little upset. We returned to the table and they were sitting separately so I'm sure they wanted Jennifer to set with Neil and me set with Dedra. I asked Neil if he would mind setting with his wife so I could set with Jennifer? He reluctantly moved. I didn't know whe the cops would do their thing but I thought it would be safer if Jennifer was with me. Jennifer whispered try not being rude. I whispered ok sweetheart. She took a sip. We talked some more and I began to wonder about the police. I took a drink. Bingo it happened 2 officers approached our table and showed their badged asked Neil and Karen to go with them peacefully. Neil startto get up and made the wrong move trying to hit the male cop and he was handcuffed quickly. Karen stood and put her hands behind her back. 2 of the officers took them out and the waitress asked for us to come to give statements. We did. The waitress thanked us for helping them and said we would provide be required to go to court. Jennifer asked if I knew what was going on and the officer explained everything and why I was asked not to tell her and that there were other officers there watching for our safety they were undercover police that they didn't want to expose their identity. Jennifer said she understood and was fine. We did go to court and they both were found guilty and sentiment. Jennifer and I talked a lot about how lucky we were.

Nope, you could be man enough to walk out and divorce her or walk out find a baseball bat, come back for a few swings then divorce her. Idiot!

This is a description of a rape, pure and simple. They were set up during the dancing, and now he is chained to a chair and she has been given a date-raoe drug...

...this isn't 'Loving Wives'... it's rape, and at the least should be in Non-Consent.

You cuckold pussy authors never can get enough humiliation. This story sucks as bad as the author does.

Might be a hot story, but it was just so poorly written I gave up.

Dude, she made her choice before ya'll even walked into that room. She obviously saw you bounded to the chair. Let her ass get raped. I would have already left. Nick is a pussy and wouldn't have stopped anyone. That's why even when you were locked up he only threatened your wife. You're a little bitch though. That was proven when your wife twisted your words around and you still followed.