by Thors_Fist
Dumb plot, highly inaccurate period profile. Might be good to get a knut off if you are totally ignorant and not over the age of 13.
Please continue. Don't let the troll Anonymous's stop your story. Honestly. Better than many of the $15 published erotic books, and many of the by chapter stories on Amazon. You kept my attention for next chapter. So good job.
Having recently discovered “Uplander” I enjoyed the first 4 chapters, but this was unexpectedly completely different. I’ll skim the future chapters and read only those about the Camerons.
I'm embarrassed for some of the scathing reviewers who forget this is a free reading site. I'll be honest and say I'm not one to hold my tongue when I read something truly deplorable but this just isn't it. Give constructive feed back but if you need to act like a grade school bully then piss off and go fund Amazon. Bezos would love your patronage!