All Comments on 'A Samurai's Punishment'

by karina_jayde

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howj2011howj20114 months ago

Excellent writing. Loved the story

kiwi857kiwi8574 months ago

Great premise and writing. Reminded me of a past Japanese girlfriend that we had many nights of bondage and pleasure.

RoperTraceRoperTrace4 months ago

Wonderful story, rope bondage and samurai, two of my favorite themes! RoperTrace

AG31AG314 months ago

Yay!!! Almost perfect for me. Definitely 5 stars.

For several years I've been looking for stories where "A strong man surrenders with dignity to sexual pain and/or objectification." Your story ticked boxes that are rarely ticked. I could have stood a little less pleasure and a little more pain, but this was great!

"the joy of submission and surrender." Good! They aren't exactly the same.

Here are notes I took from your Foreword.

"relatively short," Yes!

"more sex-focused standalone story." Yes!

"BDSM stuff from the perspective of a male character," Yes!

"this is not at all intended to be a historically accurate rendition." Good!

fun2wearfun2wear4 months ago

Very well written and a fun read! You have an excellent knack for this!

gxnngxnn4 months ago

I am reader of China. I like the story and it is like a Wuxia story but more interesting. My reading of the ancient works of erotica of China shows that people get into real business immediately without any foreplay or blowjob, but what it was like at the same time in Japan I have no idea, thanks for the information given in your work.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Fantastic storey. A second chapter is needed urgently!! Thank you

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