All Comments on 'A Walmart BBW Tale'

... and it was barely part 1 ... not much to see here.

Your stories are literally the worst on this site. You phrase sentences so awkwardly and it always feels like I'm reading someone's political and/or moral views. Both these things can be forgiven if the story was sexy but it's not. Either learn to write erotica or quit.

I liked it! It sets up a fun story! Keep going I want to see what happens!

I enjoy your perspective as a black man myself I like how you have captured some of the everyday interactions and thought processes that go through the experiences of black men

that's it??

Very good and interesting story