All Comments on 'AMA - The Boyfriend Ch. 101-110'

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Back to back installments, thank you! Really a phenomenal series, can’t wait to see where it goes next!

Really loving the story. You've done a beautiful job portraying the pain and anguish involved in gradually, carefully healing, with much scarring, the terrible wound in their relationship. I'm actually at the point where I mostly believe Cassidy is sincere in her regret and desire to make amends... I'm hooked, let's put it that way. And of course the sex is very hot. But I'm a sappy HEA ending addict so the relationship healing thing is what's got me hooked. Man I'm glad you're back.

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Just a heads-up, unrelated to the content of the story: if you're able, it might be worth asking if the Literotica admin/webmasters can edit the prior chapters to be numbered with three digits (so chapter 001-010, etc) instead of two digits. That way the chapters would be listed in order, and this chapter group wouldn't be listed after chapters 11-15 (aka 011-015). It's an annoying, baffling bug in Literotica's automatic chapter listing system. After 100, subsequent chapters up to 200 are listed as if they go after chapter 11. After 200 it's chapter 20 or 21, iirc. Making all chapters three digits seems to fix it. It's a clutsy solution but it's a solution.

So many characters. Cannot keep track so interest and score is low.

Huh. Looks like that didn't fix it. Drat. Maybe shoot the admin a message? Out of order series listings is definitely their purview. Again, enjoying the heck out of this (and all your stories, actually, I've been devouring The OF Girl recently) story!

Jeez, they're gonna have to do laundry soon with all those outfit changes . . . But also, I totally want to see JC get some too. Not sure what's next but he's a good guy and deserves some action too.

Awoooo

Seriously, despite the premise most people in this story are being really mature about open relationships and reporting to their partners. Maybe it’s just my age showing but that’s really hot. Being open about your feelings and not pulling one over on them are incredible aphrodisiacs

Okay, props where props are due. I still hate Heather and the way she treats Cattie seems like she's way beyond playful dom/sub stuff and well into actual ownership, which is fine is both parties are into it, but Cattie isn't. But she stepped up on that incident at the docks and props to her for it. As soon as that guy went for a knife a physical response was both warranted and deserved. Now if only she'd treat her girlfriend better I would be able to stop actively hoping for their relationship to explode.

Need to explore whole aggressive AI issue some more. That’s a quite intriguing concept. I’m really starting to get some overall traction on the story as a life breathing entity.