All Comments on 'Amor Prohibetur Ch. 17'

by CorvusTurrim777

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26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Good

Pretty good story. I stayed with it and it turned out to be very interesting.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 5 years ago
Not much Prohibetur Amor , Some Amor Postiche on the Scene

Sympathetic if not dynamic main characters , hooky introduction , some sharp commentary on society, fiscal management and family dynamics, a few solid scenes then story lost traction and kind of powered down like phone that needs recharging. It wasn't a bad read , but not compelling .

The Hispanic theme hit home for me on personal level but this story studiously avoided pushing all its chips to center of poker table. As for “ buying “ a home in Mexico ? The couple in story is a bit young to settle down . Renting 4-6 months is viable option . Love the gente , pero el gobierno ? Dios mio !

I've enjoyed this series as a whole by CorvusTurim777. He has sharp eye for the marginal middle and underclass characters , injecting ribald or laconic humor at timely intervals . But this installment lacked usual oomph from my perspective. Maybe if goldigging Renata and wary Matt trysted ?

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchover 5 years ago
Gaviotas is just a fancier Popotla. Bajas Golden Coast my ass. Why is she still working? What no Sentri pass?

Interesting and unique style but no denouement. Wife being defensive about her passle of possums family got old fast.

Thanks for something different

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Corvus Turrim is an author of adults-only erotica in a variety of genres, including taboo themes such as inter-family relationships, cheating wives, and in the broader scopes of fantasy, science fiction and a little in the way of horror. Corvus has independently published a go...

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