All Comments on 'Amor Prohibetur Ch. 18'

A new player enters the stage and interacts with more senior , amiable characters in multitudinous and potentially dicey ways . I’m enjoying the slowburner but discernible pace of story and south of the border locale .

What is Lily's endgame ? I like that she's a mature woman with curve appeal and that Nick isn't being tempted by stereotype puta.

CorvusTurim777 is in no hurry to tell me and is good enough at filling with low key humorous , sometimes poignant details of social class barriers between Tijuana gated community and general populace that its not a strain the author is playing it close to vest in terms of disclosing story arch.

Bottom Line : Solid 4 star story technique with bonus * for untraditional setting.

Full Marks *****

What LSD said. I'm bungling along trying to follow, but I don't think I've got a good grasp of it yet.