All Comments on 'Amor Prohibetur Ch. 21'

by CorvusTurrim777

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LordSlamdawgg almost 5 years ago

Quality Story with Multiple Main Character Quirks that Complicated & Complimented the Main Carnal Entree

This isn't the best of the author's entries in this series but still easy peasy five star quality. The first person female POV was hit and miss in terms of authenticity outside of first rate erotic forays detailed . But nuances like father not being stereotype alpha , yet owning low key strengths were well conceived and executed, far beyond ability and imagination of average author in this genre.

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

Cinco estrellas

Superbly crafted story and highly erotic. Five stars!

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Corvus Turrim is an author of adults-only erotica in a variety of genres, including taboo themes such as inter-family relationships, cheating wives, and in the broader scopes of fantasy, science fiction and a little in the way of horror. Corvus has independently published a go...

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