by Serafina1210
"..exposing her whole undercarriage." Now that is funny! Fine writing even if the tale is impossibly slutty.
When I'm in a comic mode, I love a slutty tale and goofy language. I'm glad people seem to be enjoying this silly story (allowing for the troll who depressed the score). I certainly had fun writing it.
Rarely have I read a story here with such pure, hilarious enjoyment. I sped through five pages. This was hysterical and fun and wild. I don't particularly care for "Fetish" stories or group or cumsluts or most other stuff here but I loved it all. Bring it on. Go Amy! I think I had as much fun reading as you did writing. Absolute winner! And thank you for making my Saturday morning.
What a wonderful story. Quirky and terrific.
The language is charming, more than charming. It's effervescent. This story is so bubbly and fizzy and fun that it damn near feels carbonated.
A bit a Big Bang Theory, some sexual wackiness, clever writing. And did I mention the charm?
It was very charming. Quite charming. On the charming scale it rates a C103.
I find myself charmed.
I am a sucker for humor in my porn and Amy Says Yes was both fantastically funny and extremely hot. I don't really have the stomach for the non-consent parts (or even the threat of it) but I can't judge--this story is exactly as it was intended to be and it was riveting and unforgettable. Every detail, from the porn references to the hilarious frat-boy dialogue, was just perfect.
Wow, If I could be a girl for a week, I'd want to be Amy!! If not I'd love to be her cleanup guy, YUM!!!!!! Lick, suck, kiss, kiss,,,,,,, Excellent story, Amy became real for me,,, Thanks,,,
This story made me smile. Thoroughly enjoyed the wacky humour and Amy's rather... unique view on the world. Thanks.
BF wanted me, as a one-time bio major with some experience at frats, to read this. Quite unrealistic from a female point of view- truly a male fantasy of what some guys wish women were. Still, there was one almost convincing moment- the sense of Amy's viewing herself from outside.
This is a great story because you find so many of the characters perspectives amidst all the sex. Thanks!